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That Look

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She seduces me as the world sits right beside us

Completely clueless, not a hint does she give…. Or is it me?

 

What look?   .....................   She so innocently whispers

 

She raises an eyebrow and those deep chocolate orbs double in size

They reach inside of my chest giving my heart an adrenalin shot its    POUNDING    so hard I can hear it….

 

I look left and right   ………….    no one noticed… but ....

 

She bites her bottom lip lightly and there it is again

It’s not the biting gesture its

 

That look……

 

It reaches over and strokes soft circles along my neck

Trails down to my breast making my nipples hard and my breath deep

My hands are shaking

 

And still ……… the busy restaurant remains busy, people eat and chat and …

 

No one has noticed

 

Then she goes in for the kill

I know its coming; I swear I can see flames in her eyes

A wicked grin kisses the corner of her mouth

 

She looks away and my heart gains speed

Mouth watering

Hands shaking

 

Looks back

And it’s through me, within me……. In that look she owns me

My whole body is set alight by the flames in her eyes

She’s stroking my spine

Sucking at my breast

Kissing along my stomach

And as she reaches between my legs I grab the table to steady myself

 

I look around ………… and everyone is looking

 

She leans towards me

And whispers……………………..

What the hell is wrong with you?

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that look baby girl......... lol

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  • BabyBun silver member
    June 12, 2008
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    Really unusual - thanks for entering

  • pruedence
    February 19, 2008

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    This is good. I felt the room watch as she come forward towards you...very well done with lots of good imaginery..thanks for sharing


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    I love this...so sensual and sweet...man I do remember that look and I am sure she has it...So much can be said without ever speaking a word and it can make your stomach jump...let alone that the ending is outstanding...hot but perfect in a moment of teasing...
    You are on a roll hot and heavy once more...how I envy you...
    Love to you, both.
    mom


  • Amera gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    OMG! This is really beautiful. I know the feeling so well. To be so in love that you totally loose yourself in your own mind. It is startling to be jerked back to reality.

    Love,
    Amera


    • Lexie - gold member
      February 17, 2008

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      LOL

      well thankyou,
      yep completly lost is one way to discribe it
      my baby is amazing!!!
      and yes, she has a very unique way of... "jerking you back to reality" LOL


  • honorable mention
    February 16, 2008
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    that was good. love how you put and everyone looks at th end.


  • Firequeen
    February 16, 2008

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    What look?
    I dont have a look. I have no idea what your talking about..
    hehe
    But this is WAYYY HOTT little write.
    I love the end hehe
    that really sounds like something i'd say lol..
    i love you

    • Lexie - gold member
      February 16, 2008
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      OMFG!!!!

      YOU DO SOOOOOOO !!
      and ya know exactly what ya doing hehehe
      i love you more


  • Tam
    February 16, 2008

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    ummm...damn...

    damn again...
    this is some serious heat princess...
    my laptop is unworthy of such passion but oh my god...it is so freakin' hot...I love it...
    LOL
    you have penned this so well...the anticipation builds like an orgasm...moment by moment...better and better...
    leading the reader to the final line...
    and who the hell could eat now? LOLOLOL
    excellent penning princess...
    here's hoping heat always interrupts your meals...
    gives new meaning to saying grace, doesn't it? LOL
    WHERE ARE MY CIGS?!
    love you! Tammy
    xoxoxo

    • Lexie - gold member
      February 16, 2008
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      LMAO

      well i hope so too Tammy,
      i love ya hunny

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