Early morning steams rises
upon a lake of elegance
A brisk winter morn
Emulating natures gift to man
basking in delight
A benevolent sight indeed
Nestled anonymously
Heightening senses, transcendental
Author notes
Prompt is photo and the theme of hot healing mineral springs photo by hoodoolover
In a list
A contest entry
- Healing Waters 2 by hoodoolover.
600 points, ended February 16, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Myst, I can surely see why this won gold. I feel so serene just looking at the image. Your words soothe the mind so delicately. This scene, I HAVE seen in Steamboat CO. Hot springs, got in, no one in sight. A poet's delight!You captured the solitude so well. Early dawn, a nature lover's delight! Congratulations!
Shana
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Shana - many thanks
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Ahhh... This is serene. It is picturesque as well. No need for the photographic image, you shot the picture with the lens of your pen. Beautiful!
I feel your inspiration from this scenic shot.
Congratulations on a well earned Gold!
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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Thank you so much dear
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Excellent job, this imagery brings us to the lake for sure. I loved the brisk winter morning, because, to me, that wording seems so accurate.
Stunning & well defined piece! Good luck to you! Ryan
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Excellent write! You captured the pic perfectly. Good luck in the contest
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Love it, this is exactly how it feels to be in this spot, you have nailed it, although you are forgetting a detail that will not allow you to win! Check the contest page again!
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Excellent
Terrific use of 30 words. Such a wonderful creation. Best of luck in the contest.
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very beautiful take on the prompt, good luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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Aaaaah, this is elegent. Beautiful choice of words that send me spinning through the lines... Nicely written. Good luck!
M a r l u x i a
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This is great! Pfff thought you was having hard time with the pic lol you did wonderful
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