The Gift In Your Heart

You are sweet and kind to my dear heart.
I noticed your amazing from the start.
Your deep and gentle to every one.
It seems you'd rather read than have fun.

Your precious heart is always here.
Not one time will it ever disappear.

The things you do are huge and outstannding.

You don't foccus on being demanding.

I feel that you are a deep friendly man.

Will you just give me your hand,

then I we will be an exsample.

So the world does'nt get trampled.

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i am 10 years old.It's like a two deep thing here.A person is being deep by telling them there deep.

A contest entry

Ages 14 and under: I AM DEEP BECAUSE . . . " by Sky Prince Ireland. 300 points, ended February 20, 2008, 10 entries
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Sky Prince Ireland
February 16, 2008

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Beautiful! Deep and sincere. Surely an echo of many people who tell others they're deep. I could feel it the whole way through as I read this. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
Brian