you and i know you were wrong,
you left me far way too long,
when i needed you by my side,
you only chose to hide....far way too long.
when i needed you no more,
you decided to open the door,
to come back asking for a second chance,
tell me....what if you were me?!
would you come back that easily?!
or would you close the door for good,
and say that i misunderstood,
and that"you are strong".
sorry.....
sorry i can`t forget what you`ve done,
sorry but everything we`ve had has gone...
far way too long!!
A contest entry
- come the ones who feel whats not meant to be felt.((WARNING: harsh words are used on this page)) by SignedSinerelyMe.
600 points, ended February 29, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ok. do you mind if im brutaly honest?
about what i think? because if you have a fragile heart. dot read after the dotted line
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its not to say i dont like. i do. and its not tosay that its not good. but its not great. you could definitly put more in this. more emotion. emerge yourself in who you are as the person in the beggining of the story and the person at the end.
redo the poem. even re-enter. this isnt real. be real with me. show me that they cant come back. break my heart with your words.
.ne.
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