life
beneath mist
ebbs and flows
like lucid
memories
lingering
on river’s glass
as hope
becomes thought
amidst
Sun’s glow ...
.
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A contest entry
- the color of a hope ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended February 19, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You should really think about publising
This again is another excellent work of art. You should give some real consideration to getting published. I am waiting too but have been thinking lately about getting some AP people together to start an AP book. What do ya think? pretty good idea huh?
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wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. Congratulations on the bronze.
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Hi friend, You have tuly captured the color of hope with your lovely imagery!!! Thank you for the uplifting read this morning. Bless you and best of luck in the contest. Take care, Sandy
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Hope shines through, it's the sun of our lives, mightier, brighter than the mist. So much packed into these few lines - yes, the colour of hope painted in the magnificent colours of dawn, the beautiful time of day. I remember my the first cinquain I ever wrote...it goes so very well with the thoughts you've expressed here:
"how frail
against the live
symphony of the sun,
strain vainly, the muffled low strings
of mist"
I liked this one - lovely, meaningful poetry and with great brevity.
~ Nicolette
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I've always worshipped the morning sky. A beautiful piece. I will think of it when I'm watching the sun rise over the Pacific Ocean.
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