A place where anything can happen,
Where anything,
To your heart's desire,
You can lie back on the green grass,
On top of a hill,
Gazing up at the clear blue sky,
And just dream the day away...
A contest entry
- Songs or books Options by StarLightResurrects.
525 points, ended February 27, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thank you for all your wonderful comments!
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idk... i like the imagery but not so much the way u created the image. ig its just not great to me because to me, Dreamland is a place where the unimaginable can happen, where anything you can want, you can have. Your poem just kinda reminds me of a peaceful, sunny day that you've spent in your grassy backyard.
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wow yeah nice canvas very direct and to the sky, which is also one of my fav dreaming places, once I had a dream where i looked upon the moon at night w a few friends and saw one moon turn into twelve! then a green universe came out of the river and flew away... wow it was soo real and strange it felt like we (me and my friends) had crafted the whole artwork from our combined minds which is what happens in dreams alot, alike evryones connected yeah? ANYHEYS wishing you many beautiful dream,
w porridge, maple syrup and oj
-JAS
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nice
very simple but clear. I like it, but i think you should take "A place" from the first line or maybe just add dreamland to the last line. thx for entering my contest and good luck!
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