One day
I'll dream dreams
Of soaring above the clouds
And plunging to the cool depths of the sea
I'll dream I can do anything
I could fly like a eagle
Swim with the dolphins
I could touch the clouds
Soar above the storm
One day I'll dream dreams
Again
Author notes
I got this from inspiration someone gave me a while ago.
Random... comments?
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interesting write. I like how you ended it: "One day I'll dream dreams Again" Very nice. I did feel that in the middle of the poem that the flow was off, but other than that I could relate. I think at times we've all been this way. Keep up the great job.
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Sad! But with that tiny edge of hope that keeps us from despair. Thanks for sharing.
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very good
very inspiring. I like it. very peaceful. -
the words written here
gave a serene and calm feeling
to my heart =]
it's nice to have wonderful dreams-
you can simply be anyone you like in these.
definitely was fond of the dreams you
simple wrote here
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this is a very interesting piece, great imagery and its just enough to leave me wanting more, but feeling satisfied with what you've given (if you get what i mean)
you create a great atmosphere of hope which gives your words real power. great write, thansk for sharing! -
Really very good, a great visual treat! Well written.
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Beautiful... I love the images.. the freedom in this poem...
I love everything about it...
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True optimism is an amazing thing. It gives you a kind of shield that nothing you don't want to can penetrate. This poem has more than a touch of that.
It's inspiring in itself.
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Your words soar in this piece.
Hoping for you that "one day"
will be today.
Aesthete
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