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The Ladybird

The small, minute ladybird
Slowly climbed up the blade of grass,
Damp from the morning dew,
It slowly climbed.

A contest entry

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  • RainbowGirl257
    February 22, 2008
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    thank you


  • marciakay81
    February 16, 2008
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    very nice.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 16, 2008

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    awwww this is a cute write and i adore the imagery that you have cleverly painted with this well done


  • And Hyetal
    February 16, 2008

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    Aw, this was a cute write with great imagery. I like your take on the picture prompt.

    Good luck in the contest!

    ~Cassie