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surrender of innocence

the day comes for all
when the world enlarges
and evil is recognized
some earlier then others

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 16, 2008
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    This is truly compelling and vividly detailed. Many blessings, Lavender Butterfly.


  • individuality gold member
    February 16, 2008

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    An enjoyable piece of poetry, it is always good to recognise evil quickly, so it can be dealt with, a good poem. Good luck in the contest.