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Anonymous, Thy Love, Sonnet LXIX

Excerpt from "Sands of Time" by Titus Llewellyn

Chapter iii; 'Observations'  

 

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                     Sonnet LXXVI 

 

The warmth converging over to you now,
denies that not a drop of it shall leave
as hearts have done in merriment conceive,
one's sanity to lose it or allow:
Contained in words the overture from source
has filled a sigh and sent it on a breeze,
whilst tempests urge it shudder no remorse
and neither shall they pardon your release.
I hear the thoughts surrounding you the next
whoever sends committal like I've owned
hath sworn a thousand words which now protects
the sanctuary paradise postponed.
Whilst perishing the thought I have to find,
your deep encrusted love which has been mined.

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  • Amarige
    February 18, 2008
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    Thanks for entering..this was such a lovely sonnet
    Amarige


  • sunflowers21573
    February 16, 2008
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    You are my Valentine Loved your write.


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    February 16, 2008
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    Beautiful

  • halfcrazy
    February 16, 2008

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    I haven't read a sonnet for such a long time so i'm glad i stumbled onto this one because it beautifully written. keep up the good work hopefully if you write more sonnets i can check them out.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 16, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is such a very beautifully penned poem and it is so well penned that I don't think I have ever read a Sonnet quite this powerful or likewise beautiful in my lifetime. any ways this is just such a well packed beauty of a poem that words can't really touch how deep it is. I really loved your wording as they all just go tgoether and flow so evenly and well. any ways excellent work here poet and keep up the very good work and good luck with the contest

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