On the brink of everything and nothing
swaying through insanity, looking for something
gazing through mixed and swirling colour
watching as gloomy clouds gather
colourful and bright
drinking in the soft light
life is so short
surroundings all of distort
focus on the ever lasting goal
make it through the long day whole
to continue the eternal chain
when my life stops, the chain starts again.
Author notes
This is a picture prompt, hope you like it!
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Comments
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lovely!!! the rhyme and the form of your poetry. Shart and very very sweet. Thank you for entering my contest.
Becks -
this poem of yours is filled with beautiful imagery! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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excellent!
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