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Arise

I can see the way
The path we are to follow
From my perch atop the world
I have a view of the future

My sisters below
It is time for us to fly
Time to leave this tiresome confine
To seek our freedom

I am your pathfinder
Your daring emancipator
Upon this sheer pinnacle I hang
For your own sake

My beautiful women
This shall be the day
When we all rise together
Into the light

Author notes

It looks to me as though she is pointing ahead, as if to show the way...

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  • Grateful
    February 16, 2008

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    this is a wonderful poem...with inspiring and uplifting words...thank for sharing for such a nice poem...thank you.


  • marciakay81
    February 16, 2008
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    this is wonderful...very liberating

  • davidwright silver member
    February 16, 2008
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    Very uplifting and positive words. Good write and well said. Happy trails