Evil creature of fire born;
Now you face the fires scorn,
Evil creature that brings only death;
The fire takes your very breath,
Evil creature of the night;
Now you face the fires might,
Evil creature-heed this call;
The fires breath takes all.
Author notes
wen i say 'evil creature of fire born...' im refering 2 demons
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awesome
This is another wikedly cool dark poem here and I really love the depth creativity and imagery factore dinto this poem and well you just really showed us how cool a poem of this caliber cna be
any ways love the darkness and the subjection matter you put forth into this evil write. keep up the abstract cool poetry
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Wow this is dark all right. It makes a good Halloween poem. The categories you chose I think fit perfectly with this. Nicely done.
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thank you =)
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very nice
dark n rymeing cool!
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haha glad u lykd it =D
blessed be 2 u 2
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I figured you were refering to demons. I am glad I have Jesus to keep the demons away form me. It is a good write though.
Kelli
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OMG! that waz lyk way quick i only just posted this =D glad u lykd it
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