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Beloved

Whispers of moonlight dance on your toes
Traces of stars dot your eyes
The black of the sky hangs in your hair
Your body is clothed in the night
Out of your mouth flow the words of the wind
Your breath holds the song of the sea
The fire of the heavens burns in your kiss
And the mist trails at your feet
The dreams of the world lay in your touch
Their prayers, in the caress of your hands
The roar of the waves are wrapped in your arms
In your palm lies the softness of the sand
Come, my beloved, be near to my side
Be still my love, stay your flight
Lay down your head upon my breast
Hear our rhythms fade to the night

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  • Hells Bells
    February 16, 2008
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    was short, dweet, and calming. I loved the imagry a lot your getting better. Your poetry amazes me.

  • goalsv
    February 16, 2008

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    A very sweet calming poem. Such love and affection shown for the other person. Your flow was so perfect that it made this an easy read.