This endlessly continues, their actions as it seems
When she sleeps, if she can, their faces and scent fill her dreams
This torturous lifestyle, it seems to unreal to believe
That its been happening since about, 1 & 1/2 years after she was conceived
This terrified teen, she cannot go outside
For ne other reason except for her bruises she cannot hide
Bruised wrists and ankles from chains and belt
And a back covered in blistering welts
Blackened eyes and blacker face from fists
Which are to stop her when she resists
Torture rape and more molestation
Now possible through intreveinous sedation
Missing hair and strangle marks
All due to these porno sharks
These people have been there TOO many times
How much longer does she need to be a part of their crimes?
Pedophilic pornographic bondage rape
To be sold over the net on video tape
How much longer can she handle this?
How much more till she slits her wrists?
When they see the scars of times tried
It happens more, therefore more tears are cried
They hide all the knives and blades from her
So she can't cut again, so more scars won't occur
For the scars scare away the customer
And they still want to make money from her
So now cameras fill her life each and everyday
Monitoring & filming her, for these arseholes won't have it any other way
They won't let their ""TOY OF PROFIT"" die
Yet they don't care about the tears she does cry
A contest entry
- "Two sisters" - a celebration. by Vera Rich.
425 points, ended May 2, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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As I think I already informed your entries were not elibigle for the "Two sisters" competition. The requirement was for a PAIR of complementary and reciprocally enhancing poems - not a three-part story. Also, as the rules stressed, it was meant to be a celebration so "No gloom amd doom".
So, while I appreciate the social conscience behind this narrative, it simply does not belong in this particular competition. However, you can still gain points in this competition by commenting on other entrants work once the judging is complete - which will now, I hope, be on Monday (see update on the competition page). And although you do not qualify for the celebratory "glass of virtual champagne" (50 points) which goes to all entrants who submitted a valid entry, since this was intended for a celebration, I am sending you a "glass of virtual orange-juice" (10 points) -
Strong stuff, and a stance that can only be applauded. I am wondering where part 1 is, though, as I thought we were all supposed to put both parts of our poems in one entry. Good luck in the contest.
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I feel like killing all the bastards who do this. And it happens more than I like to even think about it!!
Powerful and stark once again... Stirs up true emotion and tears at the heart!
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