I did climb
This tower steep
Sought some refuge
Or just a peep
Round here there appear
Many a spire
The summit on which
I might perspire
To see past forest
For these trees
Seems little to ask
A moment to seize
Yet little I am
And hard as I try
Still easier to see
Is the world when I fly.
A contest entry
- Photo Inspired- 10 poems, 24 hours by marciakay81.
300 points, ended February 16, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I overlooked this one somehow... The poem flows so well and the rhyme is never forced. The final two strophes effectively close the poem for the reader. Very nicely written. It is always nice to read your work.
Helen
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I enjoyed this write very much. Thank you for the entry.
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Beautiful- the rhyming is not forced, and flows smoothly
Great write. And good luck in the contest.
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Perfect connection with picture and your wonderful write. I think you did an awesome job. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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