Mother have no fear
I'll protect you always
although I am very young
my wings will carry us far
Author notes
Picture Prompt
20 Words
A contest entry
- Clipping baby's wings by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended February 16, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, big brother...
This is a beautiful response to the picture. I love how you write in the child's POV. This is very sweet and so... how to say it... delicately written. Handled carefully inbetween the palms of your hands... you know?
Wonderous read.
M a r l u x i a
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So beautifully expressed.. Many blessings... x Lavender Butterfly.
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sweet
very nice thoughts, and touching in a 'heartstring'tug kinda way! lots of luck in the contest.
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my dear friend well done many thoughts of abounding hope and strength of blessed safety freedom from fears and lifes woes. well done and many blessings always xxx
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Oh wow...you have done a wonderful job with this. Your words connect very well with the picture. An enjoyable read for sure. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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