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Sing Me a Song

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Oh delicate tenor, richly dressed,
serenading with noble cause,
celebrating each day with
simple comforts, warm sunshine,
and how grand life would truly be;

if only it were that easy.

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  • ashjoe76
    February 16
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    A well deserved silver for a beautiful poem


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    February 16

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    Congratulations on the Silver for this one, Michael



  • nothinghere silver member
    February 16

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    Wow this is superb, just the sort of thing I am looking for, well done

    Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you the best of luck

    Karen

  • Nicolette gold member
    February 16

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    I love where you took the contest prompt! Your words sing upon this page too with the warmth and depth of colour, of sunshine. yeah, wish we could sing like this too..

    ~ Nicolette


  • ardentMarch gold member
    February 16

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    awww..yes, I agree if life were only that easy...beautiful imagery..a sweet poem


  • Amera gold member
    February 16

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    Beauty filled with color and music. I like this, the cadence actually sings like the bird in the picture. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    February 16
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    The colours in your words are as rich and intense as the plumage of the bird in question. You answered the call when asked for a shot of creativity. Best wishes in the contest.

    Margaret


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 16

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    Yes, if only it was easy indeed!!

    You are soooo good at these hun... that was truly inspired!!


  • Kelli Marie
    February 15

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    A very well written piece of poetry. Your words go well with the picture. Which the picture is the cleares and best I have seen of this kind of bird...parot? I hope you do well in the contest.
    Kelli
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