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Temptress of the Dance

Watch me my darling
I dance for you
Follow my movements
As they seduce you
My hips swaying from side to side
Back and forth
It seems all too familiar to you now
Intimate moments we shared
No longer forgotten
And so I'll tease you with this dance
Play with the god of temptation
He will see what my body can make you feel
You will see what my body can make you feel
Without the slightest touch.

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  • Celticjedi
    February 22, 2008

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    Oooh...now that gave me shivers! It's so fresh, you can feel and see everything! Simply brilliant Mishi, but then I always thought so! Keep it up!
    Loves,
    Hannah