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I’m So in Love with You

Let me say these words to you…..

Let me take a moment to tell you,
The emotions I think of,
When I think of our love…
Depths of fire is no comparison
To the passion you put me through.

I’m so in love with you.

One more thing, I need to say,
I love you more then ever before
With you, I feel so much more…
No raging waters can pull us under,
Nor fear the roaring of the thunder.

I’m so in love with you.

One final thing, I will throw your way,
You’re the light holding me still,
That’s the void, only you can fill.
If only in life I shall walk alone,
Then I shall until you return home.

I’m so in love with you.

Now as I say goodbye for now,
You should know, I would never
Stay away and gone forever.
Tied together a perfect gift, you & me,
Even though it’s in our minds only…

We are what love should be…
each-others reality.


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Indeed what I think of when I think of you. I love you, and Will you Be My Valentine??????

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  • Riftkin gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    A poem worthy of Gold
    Given Silver none has been told
    Tory you are a winner Dear
    With words of love so near

    Joann

  • Amarige
    February 18, 2008

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    Wonderful poem my friend..Thank you for joining my contest
    Amarige


  • tawk gold member
    February 16, 2008

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    Such a loving Valentine for your sweetheart. I know they will cherish it for always. Good luck in the contest


  • cricketjeff gold member
    February 16, 2008

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    Who would not be the Valentine
    Of she who wrote these words so fine
    Love to melt the hardest heart
    Poured from you from the very start
    I'm sure you Valentine is true
    And wishes all the world for you


  • Lady Altheia
    February 16, 2008

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    Awww this is so sweet. Is this to anyone is particular? Good luck to you in the contest. May your muse inspire you on your next poem.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    February 15, 2008

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    this is beautiful tory
    loveing & gentle & yet passionate
    i love your background goodluck with the contest
    much love
    blessed be


  • Griswold
    February 15, 2008

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    I am your valentine baby, always and forever, Love you dearly sweetheart. Smooches and stuff baby. Scott

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