Clipping pure wings
of angelic delight;
kept close to heart
freeformed safe regard
in worldly imperfections;
Sullen thoughts of hope.
Author notes
PROMPT:
Contest photo of:
Clipping angel baby's wings
20 words or less
A contest entry
- Clipping baby's wings by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended February 16, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautifully Inscribed!
Wonderfully expressed sis-star~
Thanks for sharing, love your works.
Congrates on the HM, you go girl!
Bro Timothy
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congratulations on your honorable mention... this is a wonderful take on the picture.
♥
whisper
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Extremely expressive in so few words. Well done and many blessings, Lavender Butterfly.
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Beautiful with amazing imagery and emotion. I so enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest
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Oh I really like this poem.
Beautiful imgagery and wording
Wonderfully done through and through
Best of wishes to you
Tony
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SIS!!!
how beautiful this poem is!!!
wow...I looked at the pic...and my Muse didn't stir at all...but you penned greatness...LOL!!!
you rock!
good luck in the contest!!!
love you to the moon and back!
Tammy
xoxo
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