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Memories

When I began to fall apart I learned what loneliness truly was
And then we met, I wasn't alone.
Lay your feelings one the line one last time.
Along with the uncontrollable love you feel
The tears you cry will change i promise
Let your heartbeat echo through out the darkness
Now I'm holding a drop of time in my hands
I quietly grip the unforgotten memories
When I recalled each event one by one, I thought I understood everything
But the faded words were right by my side
Nights when I can't find an answer, a single drop of warmth, and my longing for something too far away
Amid my ever changing memories
Meeting you at the edge of oblivion
Gave me a small but sure warmth
I'm spending my whole life just repeating things over and over
I'm holding drops of time in my hands
I quietly grip the forgotten memories, the lost words
I want to grab all the things you love in my hand, never letting them go
The meaning your words release, an uncontrollable feeling, a feeling that has no answers
If only we could say all that just by looking at each other
I'm holding drops of time in my hands
I quietly grip the forgotten memories, the lost words
I'll keep this love in my heart
I've lost you...






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  • LillianEmrys
    March 5, 2008

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    *jaw drops, heart stops and skips a beat* ....omg.... you... are ...alive? I dont expect anything from you, I'm just....you're alive?


  • Florida Sunshine
    February 17, 2008

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    You'll never lose me bro ~ I'll luv you forever and ever ~ Your poem is passionate ~ and breaks my heart to some degree ~ I know luv hurts ~ it hurts cause we give all that we are to a special person ~ that person that holds your heart in their hand ~

    Well, done bro ~ You can give any reader an understanding of how much luv reall means ~ so if you decide to give it ~ know what your doing...