The thunder sings a melodious tune
That wills me to sleep, sweet and peacefully.
Soft clouds pass over a luminous moon.
Tranquil dreams invade my mind leisurely.
The comfort of cotton glides, slides like silk
And feathers provide the right contentment.
You touch my skin; so smooth and cool like milk
I awake; the sun shining so lambent.
Author notes
This poem would fall under Option #3. I mentions nature and various elements found within it.
A contest entry
- My First Contest - All Welcome :) by TizMoi.
525 points, ended February 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well Done!
For this to be your first write, you have done quite well. The words rolled from my tongue as if liquified. Good Luck in the contest.
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Thank you for entering. This is beautifully penned by yourself indeed. I love the imagery you create. Thanks for sharing and good luck.
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