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You Make Me Sick

I gave you everything
Everything I could possibly give
And this is what I get in return
[[Silence]]

You walk away…
Ignore…
Avoid…
Don’t even spare me a glance

I gave you everything
My heart
My money
My innocence

I feel cheap
Used.
Was I just a piece of ass?
An easy fuck?

Did you ever mean a word you said to me??
Or was it all just a fucking lie?
A cold and heartless
[Lust. filled. lie.]

You make me sick
You make me want to die
You never fucking cared
All you wanted was in-between my legs

And now that you got it
You just walk away.
You don’t say a word.
You don’t even look at me.

You don’t look at the girl watching you walk away
With salty tears in her eyes
And the breaking heart that echoes
Like the sound of shattering glass

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  • he broke me
    March 1, 2008

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    wow this is so intense... if you're righting from personal experience i'm sorry that you had to go through that.

    "Did you ever mean a word you said to me??
    Or was it all just a fucking lie?
    A cold and heartless
    [Lust. filled. lie.]"
    i loved this stanza.. specially the last two lines.

    xxx he broke me