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Soft Salt~

the blurred illusions
of walking on water
further obscured
by shifting waves.

their divinity made
from snowy innocence;
butterfly caresses.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • HeavenScent4U
    February 25

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    this made me smile from the first word to the last very nicely done dear congrats on the bronze. be well and be blessed


  • Ryno
    February 16

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    This is a stunningly powerful piece. The title is strong & I wasn't let down at all with the actual poem!

    Keep up the great work! Congrads on the Bronze! Ryan


  • SweetXDestiny silver member
    February 16
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    a beautiful poem
    congrats on bronze

  • delightfulmess gold member
    February 15

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    Yes.... I love it! serenty and outstanding beauty
    Thank you so much for this entry in my contest.


    delila


  • thepoetssoul gold member
    February 15

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    This is a great take on the prompt.
    Wonderful flow and imagery indeed
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 15

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    This is really nice I wish you luck with it

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