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Eyes Open






I want
  the better parts of silence
in quiet moments with you
to start this love for a second time
  to prove the things I knew
But you, my dear, can't seem to see
  lieing asleep only inches from me

I could watch you for hours on end
if only you would let your eyes open
  to hold both of ours with
  tomorrow's hope
    and future's promise
    both holding tight their breath

because your fingers hold their curving
    holding to all that's left

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I write with her beside me, sleeping, and I wondering, is this as it is meant to be?


-Thefallout

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