During summer shocks
you wave like a cool breeze
In winter chills
you embrace me like a warm wish
In autumn streaks
you decorate me with spring hopes
In spring time
you add colours to my autumn life
All along you secure me, with no burns
and with lot of avowed and gracious concern
My greatest hopes admire your streaming kindness
and my fears centred around you, fall flat, in striking obedience
Author notes
OPTION (4)
"My greatest hopes and fears are centered around you."
A contest entry
- "My greatest hopes and fears are centered around you." by Perfectly Imperfect.
450 points, ended February 20, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a good take on the prompt..
"My greatest hopes admire your streaming kindness
and my fears centred around you, fall flat, in striking obedience"
I love those lines
Well done and thanks for entering x
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Thank you
thank you for the kind words -
Beautiful
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I think you did a great job to follow the contest option. I hope you do well in the contest. Nice write.
Kelli
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