one limb tree, weep ice
toboggan paths to nowhere
just a same snowflake
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
Comments
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wow... i'm amazed at this one as well... definately deserves a trophy just as the judge agreed! ryan you rock! xoxo meg
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Thank you for your entry, wonderful imagery, good form and counts. Ken IBT
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wow a haiku that did not make me go hutchu! love it, and I hate haikus normally with success you have made me like one of a 1000 I have read!
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aww thank-you I am glad you didnt go HUTCHU!
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This haiku rocks. (I suck at this form so I appreciate it.
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you know as i read this, i kind of saw you as writing this is some monk temple in china, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Awesome
I really really really love this haiku alot from ya bro. Hiaku's make my day and night because they are so sweet and serene and well if only I could write a powerful one then I would be happy but any ways nough about that I loved how you wote this and also loved how you penned this from a point of view about to me at least a person't first time dealing with snow or even a little kid enjoying the fist snow fall of winter as they go sledding down hills streets soemtimes ect. any ways an incredible winter haiku and keep up the very good work n good luck bro -
ooohhhh...
nice!!!
love this line: toboggan paths to nowhere
great haiku you've penned here...
they are SO difficult for me...LOL...but you nailed it!!!
good luck in the contest!
Blessings! Tammy
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Thank-you
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