Steep with history
and passionate nights.
Secrets between lovers of old.
Warmth of the rose red
worn deep in the wood.
Pure romance to ward off the cold.
Mahogany's red
like lips at ready.
Night's magic of passion so bold.
A new home this time
and new page of life.
It's Gypsy Queen's secrets to hold.
Author notes
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okies...DQ me if need be...but I did it anyway
It reminded me of the one from your original room discription.
A contest entry
- Silver or Gold members only. by Riftkin.
475 points, ended February 21, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a really different take on the poem. nice job and very descriptive.
patty -
love the poem and the wood for the bed
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so pretty, sensual, just oh so...romantic! Beautifully done it flows like silk and the imagery is amazing!!!
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Love the all of this. Great flow, rhyme, and rhythm. I exspecially like the write itself. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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