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looking for (un)happiness





when you said I am
better

i thought wrong

& proved it
that very moment
you spoke

i
want
difference

&
that’s
what works
the most
















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  • in-the-twilight
    February 22, 2008

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    wow ryan this is fabulous just as they all are... i'm in love with this poem and you deserve a million applause! meg


  • Heart Sutra
    February 16, 2008

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    This is an interesting perspective. I can relate to it too and certainly I have had a few moments in my life like this...

    Thank you for sharing this with the contest.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 16, 2008

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    you know as i read this i got this, i understand it in my here. and it is well penned, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 15, 2008

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    Strange But Well Penned

    I say it is strange because well in a way it is very well penned and well it is just a very unusual but well penned style here. any ways your poem is very unique and very well penned. I liked your flow and the simplisticity behind the thought of your poem. good work here and keep it up n good luck with the contest

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