A risen scar; tattoo
Marks a special place
On her shoulder; under the cloth
Your voice calls me back
Through entombed sorrow
Unspoken messages pass through our eyes
Feeling your love
Sealed staving breath
Tries to escape through sutured lips
Bittersweet remains
Of the love I once felt
Within your tender embrace
Delicate skin
Flames from a bleeding cut
Afflicted by your will
Kisses turn into bruises
A hug turns into a cage
Eternal sweetness; doomed
Her tears floating on the mist
Author notes
i chose the word/phase bank
the words i used were sweetness ,tattoo,tears,eternal,risen scar,bleeding cut,bittersweet remains,your voice,tender,delicate skin
,afflicted,love,entombed,sorrow,unspoken,breath,sealed,kisses,embrace,hug ,mist
i hope its ok
goodluck judgeing
A contest entry
- SOULMATE A.C.R.O.S.T.I.C ~ PIC~ or WORDBANK Option of "3" by LilyRose.
900 points, ended March 2, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Darkness of depths, the love and sorrow, realities written...some left unsaid but felt...matching the shimmer of blues and shadow, very nice write.
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I hate having a broken heart. Life just seems lifeless when u r broken. I love poetry though, what a release
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This is really poetic. Quite dark yet powerful in its emotional content. A great poem, Kitten
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Wonderful
You did great with this. A terrific use of word bank. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very nice use of the word bank sweety very nice indeed good luck to you in this contest best wishes and much love always
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