Do not fear the errant and seemingly erratic winds of change,
For it is the will of creation that nothing remains unchanged,
Under going the sluggish mutation that is known as growth,
Even the stoney bones of planets are not immutable,
Time weathers all matter, rendering it to mere components,
That meet and mix and recombine, transforming,
Sameness is but an illusion of small time frames,
No span last forever, none understand true granduer,
The real beauty of creation is never witnessed, just glimpsed,
And poorly recorded by those beings that have the ability,
A lacking tribute of the past for those yet to come,
So are we all doomed to see but a single semi-frame,
A mere flicker of time in which the arrogant see truth,
In which I see myself as a mote in the eye of a titan,
Filled with longing and dreams of immortallity unattainable,
Dreams of endless deviation and tireless vicissitude,
Marching through time relentless, becoming an essence timeless,
Shaped by fate just as I shape it.
Please tell me what you think
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Very deep this is really amazing and the flow and imagery is great too
Redwing Spirit
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Wow. Really thought out this one, eh? Just joking. It's actually good to think. Sometimes, my thoughts are disconnected, though. Well, this is connected, so great job.
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Deep thoughts filled this piece. The imagery is very vivid and I feel a searching going on with it. It is true we do shape our fate through our actions. Thank you for sharing this with me and keep writing poet. It is excellent. seamaiden ♥
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This is just amazing I love it be well best wishes and much love always
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Beautiful poem, you have a great talent, thanks for sharing.
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WOW!!!
Great job here. Sensational poetic vocab.
this is packed with power. Well done.
Delila
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this is simply amazing. your language is so effective and paints an image in the readers mine. is amazing wel done
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This piece is amazing... The language you used paints a beautiful picture with a flawless rhythm...
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this poem really spoke to me...excellent images & the theme is well put out. love "...a mote in the eye of a titan..." & also "... the arrogant see truth...". just when we think we have "the answer", it disappears. will read more of your work soon. thanks.
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Wow.... This poem was excellently penned, with amazing dept and your word usage was great. I really think you did a great job on this one. It really flowed well and it meant a lot....
~ great job
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I really like your wording and depth in this. I especially like
'Time weathers all matter, rendering it to mere components,
That meet and mix and recombine, transforming,
Sameness is but an illusion of small time frames,'
and
'The real beauty of creation is never witnessed, just glimpsed,
And poorly recorded by those beings that have the ability,'
I enjoyed this and hope to read more of your writes. (I think "everyone", myself included, has toyed with the thoughts/ideas of leaving AP - but hang in there. Your writes are good, better than a lot I've read - and I'm sure you would be missed).
best wishes
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Amazing! I heard that you're thinking of leaving AP. Please don't! We need to read poems like this that aren't self-involved like most and can look at life is such a profound way.
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beautifull. the flow maybe is the best part of this poem. i enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing
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So beautifully put together. I love the flow and inmaginary in this piece. It's really captivating and I enjoyed
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This was Amaazing I loved every part of this write. I will read this over and over again without getting bored. very entertaining
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This was really beautiful..I saw everything in my mind..the words are incredible in it..I think that you did a wonderful job!
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Quite the verbiage you use in these lines- very impressive words indeed. Think you mean dreams of endless - just a typo there. Keep writing, sounds good.
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Oh YAY!!!!!!! You've been chosen to be featured in today's poem group hunny!!!! Brilliant! I'm so happy for you!!
Well you already know I've read all your work and am one of your biggest fans! Now everyone else will see what am amazing writer you are!!!
*does a little dance for you*
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You have a real way with words. An intensity of thought, etched against what we hold as factual - so much more naive than aware.
"A lacking tribute of the past for those yet to come,
So are we all doomed to see but a single semi-frame,
A mere flicker of time in which the arrogant see truth,"
These lines especially stood out for me. Great piece!
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Wowzers!!! Brilliant piece!! We are all part of an everchanging landscape, which we will all eventually mould into... as you say, becoming timeless, yet unseen and perhaps not remembered... yet still a part of shaping it.
Very thought provoking indeed!!
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This is so deeply thought provoking! Loved some of the words and imagery here so much..."stoney bones of the planet..." and "I see myself as a mote in the eye of a titan..." This is all consuming thought. Takes a mind on a journey to a distant place where what we believe to be reality is questioned...
Thanks for making me think!
Az
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