I believe life is a gift
Though through hard times we've had to shift,
Life is precious for everyone,
Remembering nothing could be undone.
Sadly, sometimes, life is taken for granted,
People don't remember we've all been enchanted,
Life is special to me, deep from within,
Even when sometimes we all know it spins.
Life isn't only all games, play and magic,
When people go through hard times, it's actually quite tragic.
Some people think life is happy all the time,
Sometimes something happens like a victimless crime.
It's sad when life's wasted, but sometimes it happens,
But when one door closes, another one opens.
People should be thankful for what they're given,
So get out there and just start livin'!
Author notes
my view on life
A contest entry
- Ages 14 and under: LIFE AND LIVING! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended February 28, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Life by Kal-El.
650 points, ended August 26, 2008, 56 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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So true this is
I think in todays world we do forgive and at times when someone who has been forgiven keeps killing and harming others it gets harder to forgive we so need to help those who continue to harm to find peace in their life so others will no longer be afraid
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this is very good love Genna
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Sweetness!
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And a fine view on life this is. I must say you speak your heart clearly and honestly. Thanks very much for entering. Good luck.
Brian
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