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Falling From You

The cold air surronded her,
her soft cry's follow her,
and no matter what she does,
you never leave her alone.

She's crying in a back alley,
she's falling right before my eyes,
I can see her breaking a part inside,
I reach to her but she's to afraid to take my hand.

I try to help her but I feel so far away,
I try to keep her safe but sh keep's pulling away.

The cold air surrond's her,
her soft cry's follow her,
and no matter what she does,
you never leave her alone,
you never leave her alone.

Unbold? Any other ideas? And the title has got to go!

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