The torrents of pain engulf my dreams
The cold stars flair doom in my mind
I have seen something beyond words
The cursed burning death marching forward
The darkness in her eyes could poison the world
The hate in her eyes could burn the hope of the world
The destruction in her eyes could send doom in her trail
The fury in her eyes could crush the hope of all
A contest entry
- Do You Want It? Do You Need It? Let Me Hear It.... Ladies and Gentlemen...!!! by JinSays.
725 points, ended March 7, 2008, 19 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Yes, I like this too.
This is a no bones about it kind of write that I absolutely adore. Thank you for entering it in my contest, and all my best in the finalist round..
Jin
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wow. i like this... and i really like how you use her eyes.
good luck in the contest.
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