Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

from thorn tree to sunflower

 

 


in the land of desert and drum it’s possible

for a child to awake in the rhythm


of uninvited hips: a thunderstorm,
rumbling through the intestines
of childhood, a thorn tree
caught in the throat;

are the hands that protest
only the fluttering of dark wings
in the night, small fingers,
searching,

thirsty for the fragrance of dream,
the sacred syllables of song
and smile,

soft,

wide like the wingspan of a heart
that gathers the mouth’s shadows
and sobs as old papers
for the wind,

and puts the feet back
on the path of
sunflowers

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



 

Author notes

everything is possible...

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 44 of 44

  • thepoetssoul
    February 10

    Edit | Reply
    What magic you have penned in this glorious poem.
    So full of rich and vivid colour, that dazzles the eye.
    Beautiful...Exellent metaphor and imagery
    thanks for sharing your poetic heart.
    Be blessed in all you ever do.

    Tony


  • Swan song gold member
    March 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I commented on this before but you are one of those poets that I never tire of. Every time I read your work I get a tingle between my heart and throat It is a lovely feeling. See look what your poems do to me. lol


  • inder silver member
    March 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    fragrant as ever

    a thorn tree
    caught in the throat;
    wide like the wingspan of a heart

    and puts the feet back
    on the path of
    sunflowers

    metaphors come flocking this spring and this piece radiates pain n hope in an equivocal voice.
    A great symphony!




  • Victory Gin silver member
    February 26, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    "I should like to change into a sunflower most of all. They're so tall and simple. What flower would you like to be?"

    teeheehee.


    • Nicolette gold member
      February 26, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Who me? Sometimes I'm a calla lily...pure, elegant and tall....sometimes I'm a fire lily...a not so pure flame, lolol! Thanks VG!


  • SerenityNChains gold member
    February 25, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    As always my friend you paint the images most choose not to see in such a beautiful way. You use your voice to sing the songs of other's lives, in such an eloquent voice. You put care where there is apathy, with a poet's quill. The beauty here is undeniable. Bravo my friend.

    Blessed be,
    Billie Jean

  • mimiagatha
    February 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    the expression of a heart knowing of the way to paint images there where words are too feeble to express true meaning


  • Sonja
    February 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I read it and re-read it... the depth of it and pain are all together framed with your words - perfect. I was looking for some part to choose as my fav's, but this poem must be the complete, as is, like its meaning. Congratulations for silver.
    ~Sonja~

    • Nicolette gold member
      February 21, 2008

      Edit | Reply
      thank you, Sonja.... what a lovely comment. Yes, this is my work - not always easy because one does take some of those children "home" but this is what I love....especially the little ones

      • Sonja
        February 21, 2008
        Edit | Reply
        Your work is really sublime. It is not easy to be faced with all things you see but it worth just for one smile of those children.
        ~Sonja~


  • Utok Bulinaw
    February 19, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    .


  • Jersene gold member
    February 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is beautifully written...in both its sadness and its hope.

    (the sunflower is one of my favourite flowers)

    Congrats on the silver!


  • Emmjay
    February 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Congratulations

    Congrats on the silver trop. I felt sadness here, very deep sadness. The imagery fed me, I was alsmost parched by the end of the read. It also left me with delayed imaginings. Very good
    Wishes -Emmjay


  • le soir
    February 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    -


  • Elora Danon gold member
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    The hopes and dreams of all children are the things that will save us in the end.

    This one took my breath away. Just beautiful.



    e~


  • Heart Sutra
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Naturally Nicolette, you always have the integral sense of a contest theme, especially in regard to this theme...children in sorrow but in hope of their dreams. The child in all of us that feels lost...you know this so well.

    What a gorgeously well done poem. I still remember the first poem I read by you and it was of this very theme in a contest my daughter was hosting for children in Africa...your poetry leaves people breathless.

    • Nicolette gold member
      February 17, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Yes, I remember the contest your daughter hosted for children in Africa - a dozen white roses, I think..(that was how me met, Zayra). Thank you so much, my friend.

      ~ Nicolette

  • Virgoan
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This piece I will say I wish I have written.

    Excellent my friend. Each line is powerful

    Thanks for sharing and keep it up.

    HENSLEY


  • marc creamore
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Nicolette . . . once again I am moved by the beauty and incredible depth that your pen, your mind always brings to the page . . . I am in awe, as always, by the voice inside your heart . . . Marc


  • Ladybug
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    somber, but soothing to road of recovery
    great metaphor here


    Tamara


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    February 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    i agree, this is such pretty poetry...


    al


  • michael thomas
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I love this poem because you so carefully take the point of view of the child and expose your delicate empathy and compassion in doing so. Your poems are always so understandable and uplifting.


  • Cat gold member
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    so many beautiful turns of phrase here-
    love the first obvious one with the jump from stanza one to two-
    and winds like a wingspan is wonderful

    so beautiful this.

    m


  • IronIcecream
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    syllable stairway
    pathways cross night
    dust from moth wings
    weights wish for light

    stumbles turn steps
    subtract gravity
    and burden turns might
    hollow breeds substance
    and fall equals flight


    • Nicolette gold member
      February 16, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you for such a poetic comment...the process of victim to victor indeed


  • NurseChilly gold member
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    from the ashes we come and then we grow.. we love, we live, we yearn and we die... in all the chaos everything becomes possible and sunflowers can grow in the hardiest soil and most reluctant parts...

    yes... this is bright yellow sun and a strong heart

    good stuff Nicci - indeed




  • leander Moderators member
    February 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I actually completely agree with what Namita said here - writing better than you is not possible.

    This poem touches the emotional strings of the reader. It carries sadness within the lines, but a beautiful and hopeful message as well.

    • Nicolette gold member
      February 16, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Lolol, I don't actually agree with you and Namita, but to have the two of your in my audience, now THAT is something else!!!


  • Namita
    February 15, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    oh, and forgot... my hope of winnings crashing down- lol

  • Namita
    February 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is just pulchritudinous. Profound, creative, beautiful. I can feel this one. An addition to your row of absolutely marvellous works... And everything is possible? I say no. Writing better than you is definitely not...

    - namita

    • Nicolette gold member
      February 16, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      I just told Leander that I don't agree with you two young, talented poets but I love having you in my cheering crowd!!!


  • Night Hope gold member
    February 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    "wide like the wingspan of a heart
    that gathers the mouth’s shadows
    and screams as old papers
    for the wind,

    and puts the feet back
    on the path of
    sunflowers"

    Ohhh...wow. This is my favorite poem of yours now. You know that's sayin' a lot, my Friend, since I adore everything you pen. Magnificent. Pure. Honest & REAL. I literally gasped, then got tears in my eyes from the elegant sorrow, the eloquent joy that only you can sing so sweetly. My God, Woman. Your heart is pulsating & glistening all over this page.


  • PageTurner
    February 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Powerful Message



    Hard hitting, Heart hitting, and Hopeful.
    You've encompassed ALL my feelings concerning
    the feelings of these children, and you did it with
    A Sighhh and a Whisper...


    "in the land of desert and drum it’s possible
    for a child to awake in the rhythm

    of uninvited hips: a thunderstorm,
    rumbling through the intestines
    of childhood, a thorn tree
    caught in the throat;"

    Exquisite, Scribe!

    ~ Nicky♥


  • Cannonsfire
    February 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    You understand them so well because of what you do in your profession, this is moving and a visual to the journey they take. Love, C


  • arafura gold member
    February 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    So very powerful... it gave me goosebumps. Perhaps the chill I felt was because I saw something there that most others did not. Children are so resilient but there is a limit to all things. Brilliant poem poet!

  • Rowan gold member
    February 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    You've undone yourself...
    this is rich, sad, but beautifully full of hope
    as a childs eyes always are. Well done, hon.


  • KittenJubilee
    February 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    lovely, my dear, as always

  • tara wilson gold member
    February 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    what an absolutely beautiful & powerful poem, Nic...I love this..


  • misselaineous
    February 15, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    simply awesome

    i felt every word
    bravo poetess

1 - 44 of 44