Something happened and it feels so magical.
Lost forever in doubt and apathy.
Please tell me these sweet words are true.
But please don't tell me I Love You.
Love and laughter has crushed great kingdoms.
Lost forever in tears and memory.
I don't want to lose myself in you.
So please don't tell me I Love You.
It's a crime and it's something to see.
What starts in hope ends in tragedy.
I could fly away without you,
Or I could be dragged down with you.
So sweet your words, I love you too.
Beauty and pleasure
The cut and the closure
With virgin ears
You are the chorus of this song.
Author notes
The act of unwantingly falling in love and of unwillingly breaking up.
A contest entry
- Do You Want It? Do You Need It? Let Me Hear It.... Ladies and Gentlemen...!!! by JinSays.
725 points, ended March 7, 2008, 19 entries
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Oh yes!
I loved everything about this write, the attitude, the plea to not fall in love, and yet, when you do, not wanting to let go. I thought I was the only one who went through that
I thank you for this submission, and best wishes to you, in this contest!
jin
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