Rich and Dark
Mysteriously Tasty
Sweet and Tangy
Chocolate
Author notes
my favorite food is chocolate
A contest entry
- Food for thought by SpiceRack.
500 points, ended February 26, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ages 14 AND UNDER: Your Favorite Food by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended March 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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mmmm this is good. dunno why chocolate is mysterious though
I guess the taste of it is mysterious. I dunno lol
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Sorry, but I think maybe you should've read my contest page more carefully. I wrote:
Please no poetry about food. Yes, I know that cheeseburgers are inanimate objects, but I don't really feel like reading about food right now. It might make me hungry.
So, not food.
Yeah, chocolate is food in my book.
The poem itself is interesting, but not what I was looking for. -
Short and very, very sweet. I like the way you picture chocolate as dark and mysterious, I'm eating chocolate right now
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I don't blame you. Chocolate is absolutely yummy!!!
Thanks for entering. Good luck.
Brian -
You're making me hungry.
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its tastey
i like it it has a lot of detial with a few short words, i like chocolate too
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Yum!
Good luck! -
Mmmmm you've made me crave too. I like chocolate with peanut butter and also New York Super Fudge Chunk ice cream. IRRESISTABLE!!!!!!!!!!! I love poems about food; especially sweets. You've made my day!
Brian -
Yummy, you have made me crave. I think I am going to have to go open my Valentines candy again. lol. You did a good job describing chocolate.
Kelli -
An enjoyable piece of poetry, I wish I had a hundred bars now, just to admire, I would not eat them, okay I lie I would eat the lot, a good poem.
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