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Six strings

Curled pose

hands slide
fingers glide

six strings turn tunes untold

New tones unfold
and fill our home

I draw near to hear

Dedication
meditation

Hair
falling from nape of his neck

I stand in still
until song's end



Author notes

I love watching my husband play guitar, so I wrote about it.

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    March 25, 2009

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    Very nice poem here. Wonderful flow of words the detail was good as well. wonderful detail and it was a pleasure to read.


  • LionessK silver member
    February 17, 2008

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    a beautiful picture you have put in my mind.. as you watch the one you love with guitar in hand. mesmerizing. besides i do [as well] have a fasination and attraction to the guitar and those who play.
    lovely.