I look at my self in the mirror
And see all the flaws that you put in my head
I can't escape with out my new friend....
I grab the blade and it gleams in the light...
The rush of energy I get from the bloom of red is amazing
Its a high I can't get enough of
I scream to the air that its all your falt...
I tried to make it work... you just left with her...
My wrist is coverd now...
I feel faintly cold...
I clibm into the tub...and forget the world
As everything goes dark...
Its snowing outside...
And all I wanted was to see the snow one last time
With you....
Author notes
I know that this is very emo w/e though hope you like it... and i hope you chose me to b in your family lots of love C.V.P.
A contest entry
- an ap famly con by wolfpuppy.
500 points, ended July 3, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I am Broken by FreeFalling911.
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Comments
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This is a deep poem and this is really what makes you broken... Thank you for sharing and entering my contest.
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very good who ever u are
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very good very good! I love how you write!!!
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An enjoyable piece of dark stained poetry, death is the light that some peopel need to feel alive in their moments, a good poem.
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