You'll do it again
You've done it before
Just crush my heart
and walk out that door
I know what to expect
Though I just keep building my regret
for ever giving you my heart
You just keep comming back
I dont know what to
You looked so sad
I had to forgive you
Make today your last goodbye
I've had enough
thats your final lie
I had thought our love would last
But now my feelings have faded to the past
I just cant wait to wave goodbye
Take back my heart for the very last time
I'm sick of feelin all this rage
Like I'm your little doll
trapt inside a cage
But I'm gettin out today
and once I'm out
I will make you pay
Cause I've seen through your shady heart
and I knew long ago
That I'd lost my part
I just cant wait to wave goodbye
Take back my heart for the very last time
Goodbye.......
Author notes
This is my last goodbye
Leaving all the memories of you behind
I will not wait here
And waste my whole life"
-Verses from "My Last Goodbye" by Trading Yesterday.
A contest entry
- MOVING ON - Breakup Poetry - Options by Girl With Guitar.
625 points, ended February 16, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"Though I just keep building my regret" --- I think this line would flow better without "just" in there
I love the emotion of this, and especially love the repetition of "I just cant wait to wave goodbye
Take back my heart for the very last time"
Terrific job. Thank you for the entry!!
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thank you
and i wrote it origionally without but when i was typing i suppose "just" slipped in
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