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"Why?"

Why do I love you?
The truth is simply true,
when I knew that you were mine,
my smile quickly grew.

I love you for your mind.
I love you for your heart.
I knew that I would fall for you,
even from the start.


I love hearing your voice,
and love it when you laugh.
I love so much that when you do,
I cant help but smile back.


Your amazing,
your sweet,
your caring, and kind.
I thought before I met you
these things I'd never find.

You gave me hope when I had none.
You brought me up from down.
You saved me from my crushing fate.
The escape with you I found.

Author notes

When I tell my Xbf I love him he is always asking why
and I am always short for words
I wrote this to answer his question
telling him why he means so much to me
and he still does...

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  • willowprincess
    May 29, 2008

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    i know how that is. my boyfriend is able to be so verbal and i often struggle to find the words i want to say. i think you've done a great job with expressing it in this poem.


    • romanticlyhopeless
      May 29, 2008
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      thank you
      haha i wrote this when we were going out
      i showed it to him and he was the one short for words...lolz

      -jessi