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Sweet Young Thing

Wizards and Warlocks
Fairies and Frogs
Giants and Goblins
Princesses and Dogs

All in the story I read every night
And dream about,
When I turn out the light.

Wands and Sabors
Potion and Bugs
Swords and Poisen
Staffs and Slugs

All in the story I read every day
And in all the games,
That I love to play

Castles and Swamps
Bogs and Caves
Schools and Forests
And places with Graves

All in the songs that I love to sing
All in the life of a Sweet Young Thing

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 14, 2008
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    nice poem... well expressed.
    good luck


  • Lorien
    February 29, 2008
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    Oh wonderful its avery nice peom


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    Oh wow that's a gorgeous poem! Very sweet and cool and rather well written - expecially for an under 13. good luck!!


  • Amanda K. Martin
    February 15, 2008

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    Awww I love this one!!! Although you didn't choose a fairy... but I'm not that strict on the rules... I think tha tyou done a good job and picked out a really good poem to submit.


  • The Green Elf
    February 15, 2008
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    my age

    sorry i didn't put my age in my auther's notes. I'm 11


  • tawk gold member
    February 15, 2008

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    Wonderful rhyme and flow. Amazing imagery. I so enjoyed reading could you please put your age in your authors comments. I may have several rounds later for the different ages Thanks for entering Good luck


  • Miss Chievous
    February 15, 2008
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    Great i like the ryhmes!

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