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Bittersweet Memories I Never Wanted To Keep

Here under
Deep within
Where you never
Searched for me

Far away
From your reach
Where you never
Bothered to be

You cry now
You repent
You regret
But you are spent

You worry now
You have lost
Something you never
Envisaged

But why now
When you have ignored
So long all that I
Ever stood for

You lie now
When you cry
Just waiting for time
To pass by

I regret
I resent
I am tired
I am spent

I despise
Having known you
Something you never even
Had the courtesy to do.

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  • XXCrimsonRaineXX
    April 21, 2008

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    I really liked the short lines. I loved the wording of this poem also. Excellent write, and good luck in my contest.

    XXCrimsonRaineXX


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    February 16, 2008

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    The short lines and stanzas really do this piece justice. I think that the fast pace feel mirrors the frantic feelings of some people when they break up (well, me... lol)

    Great work, I love the language used also!

    ♥