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Killer puppy

Killer puppy, brave and strong
with ears so short, and tail so long.

Killer puppy with a spiked collar
barely as big and long as a dollar.

Killer puppy, playing with me
Killer puppy, as cute as can be.

A contest entry

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  • Shades of Pale silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    lol! i loved it! my puppy passedin june this fits him just right too


  • Slick99
    September 4, 2008

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    Killer Puppy

    i love puppies!!! they are so sweet. this is cute and funny!!! thanks for sharing. have a nice day, -slick99


  • Solidified
    August 13, 2008
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    Sounds like one dangerous pup


  • individuality gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    hehehe lol i looked at the picture


  • individuality gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry you have penned - tis makes me think of some horror film waiting to happen i like the light imagery mixed with the killer it gives the poem a good balance.


  • zhaniswolf
    March 20, 2008
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    cute. i loved the poem so much i had to see the pic and it was SO cute. awesomeness, pup.

  • Poopa Thug
    March 1, 2008

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    Cute and Funny

    This is a cute little poem you have here. I know that with puppies I've had, they always are rambunctious and cute and give little harmless bites(since their teeth haven't come in).


  • daviscth
    February 26, 2008
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    Thanks so much for posting in my contest.
    Cathy


  • LadyDementia gold member
    February 16, 2008
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    aww sweet read. Best of luck in the contest with it


  • Kelli Marie
    February 15, 2008

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    This brought me a chuckle. Wonderfully penned. I love it! Now that is two that I love so far. You wrote an adorable rhyming ditty. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


  • daviscth
    February 15, 2008

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    LOL. This little poem will have me smiling the rest of the afternoon!!! It's exactly what I was hoping for when I posted this. Thanks so much, Cathy.

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