Standing there, a vague point
On the corruption of what we call Earth
Undo everything, redo the right pieces
Longing for warmth from "Human heat"
Mind if I fire a spark at you?
Angsty eyes from releasing too much
Time for you to also receive my love
Elegantly showing loneliness has no place
A contest entry
- SOULMATE A.C.R.O.S.T.I.C ~ PIC~ or WORDBANK Option of "3" by LilyRose.
900 points, ended March 2, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ahhh the edge...mmmm true heat of both sides of love and soul...in sorrow, earth and the human - appreciation in honest expression
creatively penned ...
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this one is quite scary too..setting fire to people...ech.
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Very clever title!
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A beautiful acrostic you have crafted. I love the picture you painted with your words. Excellent work.
Kelli
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