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If You Love Me

If you love me
Feel as if I am you
When you’re thirsty
Know that I am too

If you love me
Give me all of you
Take all of me
Let’s be pure and true

If you love me
I beckon my heart to know
That you’re mine alone
For in your eyes it will show

If you love me
Let your passions flow
Let me be the one
You see wherever you go

If you love me
Carry me in your heart
No matter where you are
We’ll never be apart

If you love me
I’ll be the one to love you more
To see what you see
For you’re heavens door

If you love me
You’ll hear when I call
You’ll be there to lift me up
And catch me when I fall

If you love me
I’ll love you more
Than you were
Ever loved before

If you love me
This I promise you
All my innocence
And you’ll never be blue

If you love me
All year through
Will be our valentine day
Me and you

If you love me
I’ll take my last breath for you
And I know you will
Only if you love me too

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  • AmyPixiDust
    February 29

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    touching and emotional

    congrats on the trophy, i got my first today,thanks for the comments on "stay closed" just a note, i am back with him now allthough that never is forgotten, keep writing, -Amy


  • badddgirl
    February 20

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    I stand and applaud!

    If you love me
    You’ll hear when I call
    You’ll be there to lift me up
    And catch me when I fall

    Oh how I long for a love like this!!

    How very beautiful, your awesome!


  • Ruby34
    February 18
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    Wonderful entry Thank you for the lovely write
    Amarige

  • yourguardianangel
    February 16
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    an ideal image of love

    wonderfully written..i especially like the final stanza
  • emokiss
    February 16

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    I thought this poem was rlly good i reminds me of a boy that i rlly like. I rlly can see all the love that you have for someone
  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 16

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    is love really that intense? very goor write perhaps the refrain went on a wee bit too long dunno? ANYWAY good gushy 'love' poem for V-DAY thanks for sharing regards zaj

  • Perception
    February 16

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    Aw. How beautiful, and filled with love too. What a wonderful write ~ and a pleasure to read. I can relate to how you feel... So in love.

    ~ Great job

  • wolfwatcher
    February 15
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    I like it

    very well done, I thinked it flowed nicely. Love is a crazy thing :-P
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