If you love me
Feel as if I am you
When you’re thirsty
Know that I am too
If you love me
Give me all of you
Take all of me
Let’s be pure and true
If you love me
I beckon my heart to know
That you’re mine alone
For in your eyes it will show
If you love me
Let your passions flow
Let me be the one
You see wherever you go
If you love me
Carry me in your heart
No matter where you are
We’ll never be apart
If you love me
I’ll be the one to love you more
To see what you see
For you’re heavens door
If you love me
You’ll hear when I call
You’ll be there to lift me up
And catch me when I fall
If you love me
I’ll love you more
Than you were
Ever loved before
If you love me
This I promise you
All my innocence
And you’ll never be blue
If you love me
All year through
Will be our valentine day
Me and you
If you love me
I’ll take my last breath for you
And I know you will
Only if you love me too
A contest entry
- fun by Amarige.
650 points, ended February 18, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ah..a warm and very heartful story of the emotions you have described here in the beautiful journey of your heart here..well done indeed..
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touching and emotional
congrats on the trophy, i got my first today,thanks for the comments on "stay closed" just a note, i am back with him now allthough that never is forgotten, keep writing, -Amy
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thanks . I am happy for you you are quite lucky.
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I stand and applaud!
If you love me
You’ll hear when I call
You’ll be there to lift me up
And catch me when I fall
Oh how I long for a love like this!!
How very beautiful, your awesome!
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Wonderful entry Thank you for the lovely write
Amarige
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an ideal image of love
wonderfully written..i especially like the final stanza -
I thought this poem was rlly good i reminds me of a boy that i rlly like. I rlly can see all the love that you have for someone
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is love really that intense? very goor write perhaps the refrain went on a wee bit too long dunno? ANYWAY good gushy 'love' poem for V-DAY thanks for sharing regards zaj
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Aw. How beautiful, and filled with love too. What a wonderful write ~ and a pleasure to read. I can relate to how you feel... So in love.
~ Great job
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I like it
very well done, I thinked it flowed nicely. Love is a crazy thing :-P
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