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The cold

A chilling wind
sends shivers down my spine.
I look around
and all i see is white.
Snow lays on the ground
as if it belongs there,
as if it is wanted there.
i close my eyes
and dream of a place
far away, with the sun shining bright.
no snow, no cold
nothing to keep me away
from a nice tan, and warm sand.
but then the wind comes againe
and i'm remind of the cold.
my eyes open
and i look around.
i'm reminded once againe
of the one reason
i never want to live, in edmonton againe

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  • RainbowGirl257
    February 17, 2008

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    wow, this is a great poem, i love how one minute the person sees snow and then dreams of the summer! well done!


  • Kelli Marie
    February 15, 2008

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    The snow and cold can sure make you want to be somewhere else if you don't like it. I enjoyed your write. I never saw again spelled that way, typo?
    Kelli


    • oneill
      February 15, 2008
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      Acctually i've kinda always spelt it that way, and my teachers have never taught me the proper way, or it's just never stuck with me, so no matter what i do i always end up spelling it that way. unfortunatlly i dont have spell chekc in this like i would in word