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emotion on a minutes notice

Busy as a bee
In the hive of my mind
Our love lost
In the game of life
I have to keep going
Its a snails race to the finish
She says I miss you
I want to spill my guts
Her eyes are lonely
I only retreat back inside

Author notes

I went for "one week after the end of my marriage - minute to think" poems. Off the head and from the heart. Enjoy!

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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    February 16, 2008

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    Because I see you're currently online, please explain the author notes I'm so confused. This isn't an option in my contest.