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The Season Of Love

Full fledged wings of love
Nurturing new born feathers-
Guardian angels



Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Topnotchsy
    August 13, 2008

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    Congrats on the well deserved honorable mention on this piece. It's really beautiful and says a lot in just a few words. Nice job!!


  • arafura gold member
    March 7, 2008

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    A worthy trophy winner indeed! You have the gift of being able to condense your thoughts into pearls of wisdom... and display them for all to see! Excellent!

  • ecrivain01
    March 7, 2008
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    This is an excellent senyru ...

    and Wanda seems to agree. She thought I should check out your writing. Very nice.


  • Night Hope gold member
    March 7, 2008

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    A lovely haiku, resplendent with graceful truth. Congratulations on your honorable mention, Poet. Wanda

  • InBetweenThoughts
    February 20, 2008

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    Wonderful imagery, the signs of spring are near. Good form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 17, 2008

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    Beautiful A true delight to read ... Guardian Angels are always a pleasure to hear about

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • diamondsr4me
    February 16, 2008

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    Guardian Angels, hum nice twist, The title suprised me. So much said in so few words. I envisoned a new guardian angel growing its wings and soon to be assigned his responsibility of caring for someone. Great job!!


  • Tarja
    February 16, 2008

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    I was expecting something like the song Seasons of Love. Though I'm not much of a haiku fan, I'll admit you did a very decent job with so little being said. Good luck in the contest.


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    February 16, 2008

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    I have come to hate

    the neccessity of pasting something silly in one's author's notes to stand a chance of winning a purportedly intelligent contest, though in this case, it seems that the silly note to be pasted is spot on, though it probably isn't for more than a few contenders. Anyway, I had two free clappies to give away which I hoped your poem would deserve and it meets that challenge and certainly deserves a third. Well done poet, yadda, yadda...


  • Aun Ali
    February 15, 2008
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    Wow, just wow

    Wow, just wow....please gift me some of the art that your pen has.

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